I am from watching my parents, looking up to them as roles models.
I am from watching my sister grow up and playing pointless games with my brother.
I am from the times I stay up late with my sister just so we can spend time together.
I am from the little things my mom and I do together, like staying home and having fun like two teenage best friends.
I am from my best friends who complete me and showed me what true friendship really is.
I am from my teddy bear and blanket that I still can't live without.
I am from taking pictures which will never change, even when time passes.
I am from staying home on Sunday afternoons to watch the Browns games with my dad.
I am from orange and brown, the colors of the Browns, who I will always be a fan of, whether they win or lose.
I am from all mistakes which have pulled me down, but I am also from success that I worked hard for, which has picked me back up.
Like the poem. Really hits home and good use of your poetic devices.
ReplyDeleteThis was very deep and made me think. Great job I felt like you really expressed yourself and put great thought into this
ReplyDeleteYour poem has a lot of great things in your life mentioned. It's great to see that you still need your blanket and teddy as they have been and are a part of your life.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on you post, although I think you used I am from a lot but idk I don't know much about poems. So ignore my comment :)
ReplyDeleteWow that is very good you forgot to underline the as in your simile but other than that it was good. Very goog
ReplyDeleteSydney, great post. I like that you include your dad and the times you spend with him. Make sure that your simile compares two unlike things.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you, you are a caring and good friend. Your poem described you perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThat was an amazing poem and I like the face that you have Cleveland spirit even though they are not the new team in the world. Whenever I think of Johnny Manuel I think of you
ReplyDeleteI like how you had specific things that make you before putting them all into a group of either mistakes or successes.
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem a lot I'm glad you have so much appreciation for where your from and that you have so much pride in it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful just beautiful ^-^
ReplyDeleteI love the similies and that you are a dedicated fan of the browns
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ReplyDeleteI liked your last sentence a lot. I also liked about how you said I am from like your talking about your future self seeing your past and present self and that you enjoy doing these things. I didn't find any mistakes so that's good.
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